Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Hi there @mcblitz, Here's some feedback on your track 'MC First track', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. Timing is important to make your tracks feel more polished, try to get your bars perfectly on beat for the next one. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Good use of effects here, really adds to the track ⭐ Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

McBlitz

2 years ago

intro lets go. ready the light dark as knight, too busy for fight Marshmallow near the floor, im nocking at your door to busy for a fight lets light, Again ye sup. ill rap and trap while you are still in the core waiting for more. bang Again boom time for doom and nursed in a room, dementations, Excavations, mutations. i can trap faster then i rap but poorly contain my expectations. ended almonto to slow. row row go bro, time ticking got to unleash, ice is freezed, fire burnt, nothing gets hurt. nation wide time to slide raps still dont help. ye allright the end. End...