Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @davidjames.9190! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'David James'! 💥 The vocals aren't coming out clear, test different mic positions and try to keep the distance between you and the mic consistent. Your flow is a little off, we think you can really tighten things up there. Timing is important to make your tracks feel more polished, try to get your bars perfectly on beat for the next one. The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

David James

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.