Joshua Karcher
Joshua Karcher

whose gonna sign me?

whose gonna sign me?

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13 Dec 2021

pulled the chains out the dresser i do not gotta count my measure gonna be better than anyone that put the pen to the letter the devil? yeah I just met her set me on fire came to jesus hope he forgives my gesture of not following right away swallowing callonopins 8 9 ten a day to keep the hate away im drinking haterade staying straight getting laid and staying paid mr mcgreggor cant get me slayed i just weighed in right after the police raid these lyrics paved with bullet spray all I see now is the sun ray shining diwn come underground if you wanna see how the rap king wears his crown. fuck a hater i aint no bellboy dont mistake me for your waiter brother was a skater im the great debater goin off call me darth vader with his lightsaber a modern day captivating decapatator penetrating like an escavater traveling to the top in my custom made elevator; so label, do want me now or later? cops want me locked up bitches want me locked down ha you know who wears the crown, the outkast without a sound you can hear a pin drop from the silence when hes throwin it out; class is in session did I mention the part where these verses are an extension of how I really feel? I aint resting only wrecking lines with sex appeal wrestling these demons fighting for my next meal for real made of steel mouth wont seal mind is surreal even chapelle wishes he had my skeel come on labels lets make a deal well get it worldwide ballistic man ha materialistic without a plan, just a retired rapper by his side now I rewired my brain to rip shit insane been through so much pain even the strain cant sustain the flame spewing from my membrane im crashing the mainframe cuz the fire can not be contained yeah im that sane. fuck a hater i aint no bellboy dont mistake me for your waiter brother was a skater im the great debater goin off call me darth vader with his lightsaber a modern day captivating decapatator penetrating like an escavater traveling to the top in my custom made elevator; so label, do want me now or later?

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YOOO DIS SHIT IS FYE LIKE GODDDAMMM, YOU GOT A FUTURE😈🎶🔥🤜🤛 Can you check me out? I’m 15 years old, and I’m trying to get recognized as an artist of myself like you! so is it okay if you can show the the support I’ve been trying to provide you with? that would be amazing 🤜🤛🔥🎶 WE SHOULD ALSO WORK ON A COLLAB TOGETHER 🤝🤝🎶🎶🔥🔥 LETS DO IT FAM, Just dm me and we will get into some of that business📸😈🔥🎶😤 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

Hey @joshuakarcher.9723, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'whose gonna sign me?'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. 🙌 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Great beat choice, really works with the track! The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

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