Jmoney

3 years ago

thank you

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @daviyoneparmer, Thank you for sharing 'SEX (17:07)' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: A great rhyme scheme takes work. Try rewording and playing around with the speed of delivery to improve the structure. Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 Nice use of effects, it really adds to the track. ⭐ You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎