Bronwyn Allan
Bronwyn Allan

JFertinz Real Shit

JFertinz Real Shit

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11 Dec 2021

yo i be pulling in a Lambo She know how do da tango Got My brothers Playing banjo my next door neighbour told me hallo from the 26K I don't give two shits I'll shiv ya neck and I'll kick yo shit so what if the police will show im pulling up with yo bitch inside my limo Yo i got them papers 2500 whats ur excuse my products are redused i can't refuse and i can't resume

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2 years ago

Hey @bronwynallan, We're gonna review your track 'JFertinz Real Shit'. Let's get it! Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. You're slightly off on your timing. You gotta practice, listen back and practice again to get it right! The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 Try improving your recording quality if you can. Try our Masterclass feature, to help progress your sound! We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

yo i be pulling in a Lambo She know how do da tango Got My brothers Playing banjo my next door neighbour told me hallo from the 26K I don't give two shits I'll shiv ya neck and I'll kick yo shit so what if the police will show im pulling up with yo bitch inside my limo Yo i got them papers 2500 whats ur excuse my products are redused i can't refuse and i can't resume

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