Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @thebsisvlogs, Here's some feedback on your track 'elevate', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. 🎧 Your bars could use a little flair to help you stand out from your fellow rappers! You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! 🙏 Great beat choice, really works with the track! Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

The B & sis vlogs

3 years ago

yeah yeah yeah elevate ingnore all the hate go to a better place don't try catch a case ur girl invite me to her place bitch on my dick for the hell of it she make my dick elevate that shit was super great cmon mate u too late got bars got money got bitches on my dick she said ur dick is like a tick soo elevate elevate elevate sorry let me illusatrate i make all the bitches turn straight bet u cant even relate super size u overweight nigga u always need a plate im sorry ur feelings hurt well its time to put u in the dirt but don't rip ur shirt ima king ima bouta fucking swing nigga u look like ur name should be ping