Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @edenistheone, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Letter To Her'! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 The vocals need to come way up, they're getting overpowered by the beat! You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. 🙌 Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! 🎶 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! 🤟 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Ryan

3 years ago

We talk so often - that your smile got me locked in - this world so toxic everyone thinkin’ everyone else is watching - but I can’t move my eyes there’s just something about you - I don’t think I could have a life living a life without you - looking up at the stars underneath the night sky - looking at the past all the things that passed me by - and when you start to cry and you say you are fine - I remind you, you are no one’s only mine - when you hug me and hold me ever closer to your chest - I get the great feeling I can finally be at rest - from the rest of the world And all the bustling noise - and than my heart fills instantly with warm and loving joy - and that’s the deal - I don’t know what id do without you - how can I not love every single little thing about you - I love your hair - your constantly changing expression - oh you don’t like yourself? - I’ll come teach you a lesson