Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @charlesjackson.9807, Thank you for sharing 'first rap made by LIL J' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. Try improving your timing, you're not quite on beat here. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Charles Jackson

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.