Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @shower_rap, Thank you for sharing 'death' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The effects here don't really work with this track, try play around with others for a better fit. There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. 🤟 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

shower_rap

3 years ago

l Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.