life is hard
Thabile Makhaphela46 Plays
•06 Dec 2021
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @thabilemakhaphela, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'life is hard '! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try improving your timing, you're not quite on beat here. This beat is working well for you! 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯
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