story line
Cole Loveland13 Plays
•06 Dec 2021
yeah got story to tell you it's about a man that I knew I know he died its just a lie but can I even deny it any longer maybe you can help me move on can it really go on like this I feel like it's a dream maybe it's the steam can it even be reality Know tell me how to deal with this pain I feel it's just a game I have this guilt this pain that is inside of me I'm going to miss him deeply now can I get any plainer how I feel about this Martha's not In these lyrics and not I this rap made its a trap maybe what I'm spittin is wak All I want to do is be with him to go with him to say good by to him I wish I had more time with him I don't think I can do that to him Let me tell you something he died reasonably my peeps and I need some sympathy what I'm tellin you is like a symphony can't you see what this is, its a storyline I got declined when the clock hit 9 just this one time all I can do is rhym if you listen to the vers it isn't a hears thing just gettin worse everything and everyone that matters to me I have to see where I want to be can't you see Now I'm no preacher or a teacher but this is more of a prair it isn't fair life isn't fair cuz it plays a croul game on us all here's another thing one things true is I really got to know you I wish I new more from you I witnessed that you did more for me and I didn't get to repay you back you were at your preachin hight it was your right you were helping me with my music now I'm going to lose it can I really do it I could be famous I don't think I could ace this I could drive cars under the stars like Bruno Mars dear God I say to you take care of this family for me and you this man you called home ment alot you see I land a lot you see I don't know what to do see I'm fightin through the day see I'm fighting every hour every minute and second to just get through weeks since you called him home see God help me I won't last see I need to ow what to do see help my family please what do I do I lost a true friend that day alone g with my grandpa then weeks later I lost another friend from this plague and you called them home see, there's one last thing I need to tell you God I need you to take this pain that is inside of me, there's one last thing g I need to tell you all you see to me he was more he was a friend, a brother, a teacher, a preacher, and most of all a father but like so.e fathers he thought me about music and how to care for others he taught me about the Bible he has d the answers to my questions and that is how I like to remember this man
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yo thanks for the input, I'll use it
Hey @coleloveland, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'story line', here are our thoughts 💥 The lyrics are fire, nicely done! 🙌 Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 This track makes the listener tap into their emotions, well done. 💜 A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
yeah got story to tell you it's about a man that I knew I know he died its just a lie but can I even deny it any longer maybe you can help me move on can it really go on like this I feel like it's a dream maybe it's the steam can it even be reality Know tell me how to deal with this pain I feel it's just a game I have this guilt this pain that is inside of me I'm going to miss him deeply now can I get any plainer how I feel about this Martha's not In these lyrics and not I this rap made its a trap maybe what I'm spittin is wak All I want to do is be with him to go with him to say good by to him I wish I had more time with him I don't think I can do that to him Let me tell you something he died reasonably my peeps and I need some sympathy what I'm tellin you is like a symphony can't you see what this is, its a storyline I got declined when the clock hit 9 just this one time all I can do is rhym if you listen to the vers it isn't a hears thing just gettin worse everything and everyone that matters to me I have to see where I want to be can't you see Now I'm no preacher or a teacher but this is more of a prair it isn't fair life isn't fair cuz it plays a croul game on us all here's another thing one things true is I really got to know you I wish I new more from you I witnessed that you did more for me and I didn't get to repay you back you were at your preachin hight it was your right you were helping me with my music now I'm going to lose it can I really do it I could be famous I don't think I could ace this I could drive cars under the stars like Bruno Mars dear God I say to you take care of this family for me and you this man you called home ment alot you see I land a lot you see I don't know what to do see I'm fightin through the day see I'm fighting every hour every minute and second to just get through weeks since you called him home see God help me I won't last see I need to ow what to do see help my family please what do I do I lost a true friend that day alone g with my grandpa then weeks later I lost another friend from this plague and you called them home see, there's one last thing I need to tell you God I need you to take this pain that is inside of me, there's one last thing g I need to tell you all you see to me he was more he was a friend, a brother, a teacher, a preacher, and most of all a father but like so.e fathers he thought me about music and how to care for others he taught me about the Bible he has d the answers to my questions and that is how I like to remember this man
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