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06 Dec 2021

hate to have to wake up this way nobody can relate. swet around my coller cant even shout or holler. screaming inside my head kind of feel like It would be better to be dead. and I'm just getting out of bed. have to worry so much I'm only 13 why these bitches got hurt me. mentally and internally. once again I'm only 13,13. so much pressure on me got anxiety already. next comes depression these little bitches need to learn there lesson.

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3 years ago

Hi there @thepotterkid, Here's some feedback on your track 'be', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Turning the vocal volume up a notch would really improve the mix. We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. 🎶 You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! 🤟 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

hate to have to wake up this way nobody can relate. swet around my coller cant even shout or holler. screaming inside my head kind of feel like It would be better to be dead. and I'm just getting out of bed. have to worry so much I'm only 13 why these bitches got hurt me. mentally and internally. once again I'm only 13,13. so much pressure on me got anxiety already. next comes depression these little bitches need to learn there lesson.

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