Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @cheesyburger, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Sprayin '! 💥 Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 This might not be your best track, not the best original track cover as well. Be careful. But keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Cheesy Burger

3 years ago

I'm in town sprayin him down I did that shit cause he was fuckin around that boy shouldn't have been actin a clown now look at him now he be shut down yeah yeah yeah. Believe me when I started this career there was no competition I'm on a mission he keeping his distance cause in the instance where I had the 9 he was gunna cry but I let the bullets fly time and time again I've been tested and arrested but I'm still on my same old shit cause that's how I run this bitch you know we shot a boy when he snitched like takashi 6 9 that boy might die cause snitches get stitches yeah I'm spitting bars like its nobodys business half my friends in prison but they never snitching never told names cause they ain't a lame if your a bitch I'm boutta cause you pain people tell me to change but I stay the same can't change the shit you've been doing forever and ever ever can't change that endeavor I know you think its clever but this shit ain't like a lever can't automatically change in your ways cause that shit doesn't just happen like how i only recently started rappin and I'm laughin cause people telling me I can't be rappin you know he capping yeah cause I'm chasing these dream that's been an never ending endeavor and it's time for me to take my fame to s brand new game yeah yeah yeah today's the day that I make a slight change from my old ways I'm kickstarting my career I don't have fear I'm gunna be at the top yeah I go pop pop up on your block my clip ain't stock but my phone screen locked that boy better stop talking before he gets clocked  knock knock his head now he dead that boy talked shit now his bitch giving me head locked and loaded we causing explosions playin it up like we on Nickelodeon got all my trophies they all on a podium that boy fizzing up like he had to much sodium yeah its showtime bitch I'm not backstage got a glocky just in case cause I know some bitches like to rage like a storybook bitch I'm flippin the page they put me in a cage but they can't keep me contained you think I'm joking I'm finna make this bitch go up in flames you tried to be tough but now you looking ashamed you say you got bands but that's just a claim now get the fuck outta here before you get yo ass slain I'm in town sprayin him down I did that shit  cause he was fuckin around that boy shouldn't have been actin a clown now look at him now he be shut down