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AquaticDreams (11:48:31)

xxlucidxx
AquaticDreams (11:48:31)

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05 Dec 2021

aunt was on hospice Surrounded by darkness Sadness cut me with sharpness She was wise and harmless Thought God was heartless not healing her right Slowly passed away in the dead of the night Thinking God never shined his own light First freestyle about my trauma and will possibly be my intro for mixtape.

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3 years ago

Hi @xxlucidxx! Welcome to our feedback of 'AquaticDreams (11:48:31)'! 💥 The vocals came out real clear. However you recorded them keep doin' it. Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 Nice crisp recording. Sounds great! ✔ Why not try using some of our in-app effects, such as auto-tune or equalizer, to take your track to the next level? It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

aunt was on hospice Surrounded by darkness Sadness cut me with sharpness She was wise and harmless Thought God was heartless not healing her right Slowly passed away in the dead of the night Thinking God never shined his own light First freestyle about my trauma and will possibly be my intro for mixtape.

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