Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @tigergaming.7869, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'the goner'! 💥 Your bars need work, try write lyrics that are meaningful to you. Your flow here needs improvement, try and work on this for your next track. The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Tiger gaming

3 years ago

just made it to the top where I see him drop how he's away to rot he clean up with his mop working at the shop he's like a bot somewhat he can't even afford a coconut he doesn't have a cup now he at the bottom. he is forgetten not got any positions can't even afford cotten I be selling his carton he has fallen use to be a king wearing a diamond ring he could sing bought himself everything except a swing with A spring and some bling