Luke Kirk

The Dream

Luke Kirk
The Dream

12 Plays

30 Nov 2021

hop in the GTR Yh that's the dream it's like I'm in VR wearing supreme I've got force ones Rolex's more then one them dickeds think I'm lying I'm here just here winning you're there just whining I'll be buying young Essex boy this life i try to enjoy now I wish I had all the cash but at the moment I'll have to stick with pie and mash brixton bullies time to dash to become pro that's the best I say it with chest if that's my journey I'll be blessed and for all the haters it's hard to digest Yeah, the flow ain't mine 'cause I'm feeling ill I beg someone ask me how (How) Well I got checked up and my doctor said that it's influenza But I'm in the booth tryna be a rapper Not an influencer

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3 years ago

Hey @lukekirk, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'The Dream'! 💥 Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. The vocal recording quality is good! Nicely done! Check out our Masterclasses for help with lyrics and recording your next track! We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

hop in the GTR Yh that's the dream it's like I'm in VR wearing supreme I've got force ones Rolex's more then one them dickeds think I'm lying I'm here just here winning you're there just whining I'll be buying young Essex boy this life i try to enjoy now I wish I had all the cash but at the moment I'll have to stick with pie and mash brixton bullies time to dash to become pro that's the best I say it with chest if that's my journey I'll be blessed and for all the haters it's hard to digest Yeah, the flow ain't mine 'cause I'm feeling ill I beg someone ask me how (How) Well I got checked up and my doctor said that it's influenza But I'm in the booth tryna be a rapper Not an influencer

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