The Dream
Luke Kirkhop in the GTR Yh that's the dream it's like I'm in VR wearing supreme I've got force ones Rolex's more then one them dickeds think I'm lying I'm here just here winning you're there just whining I'll be buying young Essex boy this life i try to enjoy now I wish I had all the cash but at the moment I'll have to stick with pie and mash brixton bullies time to dash to become pro that's the best I say it with chest if that's my journey I'll be blessed and for all the haters it's hard to digest Yeah, the flow ain't mine 'cause I'm feeling ill I beg someone ask me how (How) Well I got checked up and my doctor said that it's influenza But I'm in the booth tryna be a rapper Not an influencer
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hop in the GTR Yh that's the dream it's like I'm in VR wearing supreme I've got force ones Rolex's more then one them dickeds think I'm lying I'm here just here winning you're there just whining I'll be buying young Essex boy this life i try to enjoy now I wish I had all the cash but at the moment I'll have to stick with pie and mash brixton bullies time to dash to become pro that's the best I say it with chest if that's my journey I'll be blessed and for all the haters it's hard to digest Yeah, the flow ain't mine 'cause I'm feeling ill I beg someone ask me how (How) Well I got checked up and my doctor said that it's influenza But I'm in the booth tryna be a rapper Not an influencer
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