Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @valknox, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'sad day'! 💥 Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 Good use of effects here, really adds to the track ⭐ Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Val Knox

3 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.