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Lonely (10:23:33)

Lonely (10:23:33)

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27 Nov 2021

I remember days of livin' broke I remember sleepin' on the floor Tell my brothers ain't no losin' hope All my friends are dead and they old What you need? I ain't trippin', bitch, I got it We might catch 'em slippin', then it's tragic Reach up to the stars, got a habit We was six deep on a mattress On the ten-speed, that was traffic Now I got a lil' mo' tint, speedin' in traffic (Skrt, skrt, skrt, skrt) I'm not what you need, I'm a savage I sing to my fully automatic

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3 years ago

Hey @62bpkxlvty, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Lonely (10:23:33)'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Try repositioning your mic to get them vocals sounding clean. Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. 🌠 Great beat choice, really works with the track! A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

I remember days of livin' broke I remember sleepin' on the floor Tell my brothers ain't no losin' hope All my friends are dead and they old What you need? I ain't trippin', bitch, I got it We might catch 'em slippin', then it's tragic Reach up to the stars, got a habit We was six deep on a mattress On the ten-speed, that was traffic Now I got a lil' mo' tint, speedin' in traffic (Skrt, skrt, skrt, skrt) I'm not what you need, I'm a savage I sing to my fully automatic

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