Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @jeremiahluke! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Jerry's'! 💥 Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! Good choice of beat! 🎼 Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Your bar writing is a hugely respected skill in hip hop, why not give that a try next! Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jeremiah Luke

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.