Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @snowlitnights, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Struggle'! 💥 Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. Think about where the words fall in line with the beat and experiment. This will improve your flow. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? Use one of our Masterclasses for ready to go lyrics and help with your next track! Thank you so much for your submission, we loved listening. We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Ray Night

3 years ago

Look upon my Epitaph It'll be more than a simple Choreograph Soon they'll be asking for my Autograph Itll be 50% me, the other half will have to stay on my behalf as I run and burnout my calves. yeah, my lifes a Grind Im not Blind Im lined up, twined up ready to go its hard to find a mind like mine youre gonna be wrapped up in a bund as I hear you whine Do you see now? I ain't as kind as you thought me to be, Im refined, defined and needed a minute to realign oop, but here I am, Remind me, how'd it go again? That's right. You wanna find me? watch me from the stands. I'll be on stage taking out my rage. its locked inside a cage as i sit back and smoke my sage to disengage. I went to this industry because im tired of minimum wage.