first freestyle
Thomas Sr.8 Plays
•25 Nov 2021
yo im rappin non stop my raps are off the top I'm pouring up I'm tipping off one more time I'm blastin off Launching into outter space At whatever cost or loss Loosing it because I'm not austronought outer space I'm a space cadet you know ion fuck with lames so you know I'm getting paid direct deposit not no fuckin check my rhymes are a bit delayed but it's just part of my ways to make you haters upset that's my way of showing you ion play bitch fuck recess out t] your name in my book now your title might mean less Meaningless lessons of a recession so back off before I burst into a ball of flame and roast you up to your fuckin neck that's what I said I'm not gambling this ain't o time for no fuckin bets run along you in the begining of a maze and there's nothing to stop what happens next caught a long sharp blade it went straight across your fuckin chest now I'm getting paid it's direct you get a place in hell with your regrets Now I'm going to get upset. It's too much for your faith So bitch GTFO my face Learn to get cash more than 1 way faster than a British maid licking a Spanish grade A filet Let me flip the tape Clip the bait Bitch you know it's bates Tha gr8 coming live ain't no way you say I'm fake I make shit happen like a magical flame I make bitches sparkle like a metallic flake I get home from a long day and properly sway to my domain Kick off the Jay's and have a mayonnaise Ham turkey and cheese please Or a PB and j There's nothing that can make me a
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Hi there @thomasbatessr., Here's some feedback on your track 'first freestyle ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! We like the bars, well written! Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! 🤩 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
yo im rappin non stop my raps are off the top I'm pouring up I'm tipping off one more time I'm blastin off Launching into outter space At whatever cost or loss Loosing it because I'm not austronought outer space I'm a space cadet you know ion fuck with lames so you know I'm getting paid direct deposit not no fuckin check my rhymes are a bit delayed but it's just part of my ways to make you haters upset that's my way of showing you ion play bitch fuck recess out t] your name in my book now your title might mean less Meaningless lessons of a recession so back off before I burst into a ball of flame and roast you up to your fuckin neck that's what I said I'm not gambling this ain't o time for no fuckin bets run along you in the begining of a maze and there's nothing to stop what happens next caught a long sharp blade it went straight across your fuckin chest now I'm getting paid it's direct you get a place in hell with your regrets Now I'm going to get upset. It's too much for your faith So bitch GTFO my face Learn to get cash more than 1 way faster than a British maid licking a Spanish grade A filet Let me flip the tape Clip the bait Bitch you know it's bates Tha gr8 coming live ain't no way you say I'm fake I make shit happen like a magical flame I make bitches sparkle like a metallic flake I get home from a long day and properly sway to my domain Kick off the Jay's and have a mayonnaise Ham turkey and cheese please Or a PB and j There's nothing that can make me a
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