Rap Fame A&R

2 years ago

Yo @the_ogre, It's time for us to take a look at 'Rough Childhood'! 💥 Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. You're getting really close having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 The recording is a little fuzzy, try improving the sound quality if you can. The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

D1zzy D1amonds

2 years ago

yeah i think im crazy the opps got fucked up so bad that they got me sippin lazy now im in the crib wit the homies and we all gettin hazy AYE You dont wanna hear my story youll get shocked like you held a chidori,it gory unlike naruto ya gal adored me its cool g,still glory over coochie if your for me then im gonna need proof g cus everybofy round me died and everybody round pied,now ya movin fruity sayin that yu want me back but im tryin yo dead ahk dont ask where im at you dont even want no scraps .45 vs the semi and you still got smacked "bout that life" stop the cap you know two bars you should work on that my name you could never throw dirt on that My samurai your shawty twerks on that WOOH