Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi there @jamesbarnett.7889, Here's some feedback on your track 'sanfransico night's!', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Make sure your mic is at a good distance while you record, your vocals are a bit unclear on this one. A bit of inspiration could really improve your bars. Think about a story you can tell best. Improve your flow by listening to your favourite artists and paying attention to the flow patterns they use! This beat is working well for you! 🎼 We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

james barnett

3 years ago

do it don't do it the cristle got me by the hold THE CRISTLE got me by the hold i be smoking another bowl flik flik taking another soul! I don't want to be dowle but is the whoel over somebody's eyes because there throwing down with the clones smoking another round! and I'm jumping in my caddy because I'm a realy bad daddy my brothers in the back selling some crak and I got a pip in my pocket and then whoop whoop so another Mila flies and another person dies and another mother crys if you want to we're the bag u better fear that flag!