the scheme of the land

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explain the scheme of the land if its the free but you have to pay cash for a dream i would rather chase that creme slanging wafers the great escapers up the tapers for a chemical flavor let it savor then build your empire and let your money be the emporer toss it to the energetic just like darth vader my dreams come to play over the swaye of my father wayne young money became a dough gainer a free substainer the stone was in the manger the coat was on the hanger now i am entering a airplane hanger hoes i qint have the time to tame her so i left her with a tweeker she was crying but she made her choice now that pussyz not even moist theres always an extra church aroubd the corner but i prayed to the reaper to settle my coroner then i divorced her and had her imported niw through hoes i sorted because i was almost aborted and my brother was deported so i wrote this song to the dearly departed becaude Lucifer had me matyred shes my spine all she do is wine

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Jonathan Lang

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5 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @jonathanlang, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'the scheme of the land', here are our thoughts 💥 Think about how you want to deliver your bars, and try new flows to show your talent. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Maybe try our Masterclasses, to help fine tune your skills! You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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