oh jesus
PULLED UP IN A VEHICLE THE NEIGHBORHOOD WAS PEACEFUL BUT IM SICK OF THESE PEOPLE. WHITE FENCES THEY GLEEFUL BUT THE WORLDS IN FREE FALL.. SO THE SPOILS OF WAR THEY CAN KEEP ALL. NOT DIVIDE IT EQUAL.. I SLAM MY DOOR WHEN I GET OUT AS FAST AS VIN DIESEL IN A FAST AND FURIOUS SEQUAL. IM SICK LIKE THE MEASLES. FIRST THEY WANA POLICE ALL.. MAKE US FOLLOW INSTRUCTIONS.. TAKE OUR BRAIN LIKE ABDUCTIONS LIKE ALIEN SUCTION AT AN OUT OF WORLD FUNCTION. THE SIRENS GO NEE-NAW NEE-NAW CALL ME AN AMBULANCE COZ THE PAINS LIKE AN ACCIDENT THAT FEELS LIKE MY KNEE'S SAWED. WHEN WE EXPECTED A TREE FALL. POLICTICIANS GOT OUR BRAIN IN SUBMISSION.. IM SHY ONCE BITTEN FORGET YOU AND YOUR SYSTEM. I'M A LION NOT A KITTEN HOW'D THEY GET THESE RULES WRITTEN? I MIGHT END UP IN PRISON THEN HAVE A BOW AN A RIBBON TIED ON THIS TYPE OF LIVING IT MAKES ME THINK OF QUITTING. BUT ONCE THE NEW AGE HAS RISEN WE'LL ALL KNOW THE VILLAN ITS US MEN AND THE WOMEN WITH EYES AND NO VISION..
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Yo @ellabowles, We listened to your track 'oh jesus', here's our report: Track Artwork ✅ Track Length 🛠 Title ✅ Description ✅ Bars ✅ Cadence/Flow ✅ Delivery ✅ Vibe 🛠 Concept ✅ Trending ⭐️ Recording quality 🛠 We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎 ⭐ - Feature Worthy ✅ - Good Start 🛠 - Needs Improvement
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