Come and go
103 Plays
•22 Nov 2021
I think it’s time for you to go pack yo stuff walk through the door Because of all the pain you caused me and how you traumatized me this toxic love isn’t it come on baby just commit I want u and that is it I think u are my only fix I don’t think I could let you slip out my arms In to a pit of darkness we both are here we could try to fix probably won’t work come on baby don’t be a jerk you can’t just leave me in the dirt I feel like it’s walk in walk out is that’s all we know i’ll put it out there so everybody knows put my emotions in this song so dammit here you go I feel like Juice WRLD and the kid Laroi Dead inside Man you don’t understand how many times I’ve cried for help but no one by my side
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hey @wwitw6ypme, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Come and go', here are our thoughts 💥 Lovin' the vocal level, it's the perfect volume over the beat so we can hear both. ✅ Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ Improve your flow by listening to your favourite artists and paying attention to the flow patterns they use! Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Lovin' the casual vibe to this. Feels effortless. 🌊 If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Dope 🔥
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