Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @slimeslatt338, We're gonna review your track 'first song'. Let's get it! Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? A great rhyme scheme takes work. Try rewording and playing around with the speed of delivery to improve the structure. Your flow here needs improvement, try and work on this for your next track. Good choice of beat here! 🎼 You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Slimeslatt 338

3 years ago

need work practice but I always wanna be a rapper imma keep pushing myself .