Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @noobutofu, It's time for us to take a look at 'justice'! 💥 The beat is a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right. Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Noob u Tofu

3 years ago

hey hey hey hey hey hey walking up in the star with this lil bar justice be walking just like we talking pull up with the heat now we jumping we ain't goofy put him in his spot one place just like we need taste in this place race like in a track slack flack still talking rhythm back hey walking up in the star with this litter bar torr core seen me go crazy door sheesh we add more sauce like its dips u know is fire cause we put in the heat pepole be rapping capping whole star like its Japan stan