Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @xdeeparks! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'COLD (21:13:31)'! 💥 The rhyming here is a bit off, try and work on this to give your track that extra boost. Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. Try listen back to your rap and see if you can get your bars to have better timing with the beat. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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3 years ago

lmao lol his gay 🤣

xdeeparks

3 years ago

Dissin the whole gc aric got it the worst