Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @hotglox! Welcome to our feedback of 'whoopin'! 💥 Your bars need work, try write lyrics that are meaningful to you. Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 Good choice of beat here! 🎼 You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Brady

3 years ago

rapping