Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @jakeroyce, Thank you for sharing 'Hyper (04:14)' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: A bit of inspiration could really improve your bars. Think about a story you can tell best. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Great beat choice, really works with the track! Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jake Royce

3 years ago

What the fuck you think this is, you think your some kind of whizz. Shit your just piss, your just your daddy's jizz that never made it in your mommy's slit, speaking of which stupid bitch owes me from taking all that dick up in my click. Tell her to pay up or is Wayne Brady gonna have to smack a bitch. listen up kids if you listen to shit then shut your lids, stop rapping or you will get to napping, while I'm lapping you in this game of life, fucking your wife, living in spite. ok not quite alright. lp