Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @dylandavies.7050, Thank you for sharing 'My pain ' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! Can't hear your vocals too well on this one, make sure you're the right distance from your mic. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Great beat choice, really works with the track! The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Dylan Davies

3 years ago

Just because you don’t see my scars that’s doesn’t mean they aren’t all over my heart I’m sure that this song you will be able to relate. I feel pain everyday I cry myself to sleep every night I have demons inside my head Demons who seem to be taking over my mind my soul and all over my body They are the reason why I have anxiety, they are the reason why I cry myself to sleep everyday and night I have voices in my head that make me look crazy voices in my head that no one seems to understand voices in my head that make me want to just yell and shout The society doesn’t see my tears running down my face hey are to busy with their everyday life I’m screaming and I’m yelling but no one seems to hear Just because you don’t see my scars that doesn’t mean they aren’t all over my heart I feel pain everyday - I cry myself to sleep everyday and every night I have demons in my head they tell me things They make me look crazy I’m not mad Im not going insane Everyone think I’m lying but I’m not I’m just some person who looking for help that no one seems so care even when I yell and shout So please Deakin let me be let me rest it been ages since I’ve last rest - I’m tired of all the tears an