7 Plays
•15 Nov 2021
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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What's up @kieranbobby, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at '1'! 💥 The flow here is a bit off, to make the most of your track try and improve on this. There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 Clear recording here, this really helps add to your track. ✔ Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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