Rain Rain
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•15 Nov 2021
rain rain go away rain rain go away I just wanna go out today hop up in the amg n go n play like dolph fuck shit up in a major way step on the gas and haul ass 200 on the dash I drive like Ricky Bobby so I won't crash you either first or last all I do is win like Lewis Hamilton I'm in my own class my swag different yea I brag different rain rain go away rain rain go away
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hey @DowJonez, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Rain Rain', here are our thoughts 💥 There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 Great rhyme skills, you got the poetry flowin'! Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? Try adding, adjusting and removing effects to find what works best for the track. Just gotta pay a little more attention to the details! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. 🤟 We can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
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