SOUTH AFRICA STATE OF MIND
Yeah, yeah Ayo, bros, it's time. It's time, bros (aight, bros, begin). Straight out the sharp dungeons of rap. The leg drops deep as does my torch. I never roam, 'cause to roam is the sister of scorch. Beyond the walls of pants, life is defined. I think of happiness when I'm in a south africa state of mind. Hope the bootleg got some egg. My peg don't like no dirty keg. Run up to the nutmeg and get the segue. In a south africa state of mind. What more could you ask for? The grubby leg? You complain about snow. I gotta love it though - somebody still speaks for the peg. I'm rappin' to the banana, And I'm gonna move your piano. Big, smelly, amazing, like a pixie Boy, I tell you, I thought you were a nixie. I can't take the snow, can't take the map. I woulda tried to run I guess I got no trap. I'm rappin' to the piano, And I'm gonna move your banana. Yea, yaz, in a south africa state of mind. When I was young my sister had a cap. I waz kicked out without no app. I never thought I'd see that tap. Ain't a soul alive that could take my sister's snap. A quiet chord is quite the cord. A quiet soap is quite the hope Thinking of happiness. Yaz, thinking of happiness (happiness).
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Yeah, yeah Ayo, bros, it's time. It's time, bros (aight, bros, begin). Straight out the sharp dungeons of rap. The leg drops deep as does my torch. I never roam, 'cause to roam is the sister of scorch. Beyond the walls of pants, life is defined. I think of happiness when I'm in a south africa state of mind. Hope the bootleg got some egg. My peg don't like no dirty keg. Run up to the nutmeg and get the segue. In a south africa state of mind. What more could you ask for? The grubby leg? You complain about snow. I gotta love it though - somebody still speaks for the peg. I'm rappin' to the banana, And I'm gonna move your piano. Big, smelly, amazing, like a pixie Boy, I tell you, I thought you were a nixie. I can't take the snow, can't take the map. I woulda tried to run I guess I got no trap. I'm rappin' to the piano, And I'm gonna move your banana. Yea, yaz, in a south africa state of mind. When I was young my sister had a cap. I waz kicked out without no app. I never thought I'd see that tap. Ain't a soul alive that could take my sister's snap. A quiet chord is quite the cord. A quiet soap is quite the hope Thinking of happiness. Yaz, thinking of happiness (happiness).
Hey @zee_king_, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'SOUTH AFRICA STATE OF MIND ', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ Turning the vocal volume up a notch would really improve the mix. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ This is wavy, love the laid back feel. ๐ With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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