Noyze
Noyze

first track

first track

7 Plays

13 Nov 2021

Life is getting hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I'm stuck living in the basement, I just keep on trying jut to get to higher placement, Life is getting hard, But I’ll fake it till I make it, I can’t wait for a long time Now I’m getting anxious, growing more impatient Waiting patiently for my next payment now I'm busy touring across the nation flowing crazy too hard to explain it

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3 years ago

Yo @doomslayer.7355, It's time for us to take a look at 'first track'! 💥 The vocals are a tiny bit too quiet, see if you can put them up a bit! You're getting really close having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Loving the laid back vibe here! 🌊 One of the main pillars of hip hop is writing, why not try some of your own bars next time! You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

Life is getting hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I'm stuck living in the basement, I just keep on trying jut to get to higher placement, Life is getting hard, But I’ll fake it till I make it, I can’t wait for a long time Now I’m getting anxious, growing more impatient Waiting patiently for my next payment now I'm busy touring across the nation flowing crazy too hard to explain it

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