J_money

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13 Nov 2021

i just died like my father s dad were going to steal the crown that you thought you had im not so sadi just hit up Chad let me grab a snack it tast like crab hes going to have my back sometimes its crap we're going to open the door and see who's there I hope we do not fear maybe I need a beer and i caught a tear maybe I need to learn how to get your Mans its a war maybe theres a glock in the store maybe hit up Thor get your chores little George! before it' pours in the night its a fight is that's all right i got some might for the right fight and i got alot of sight

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3 years ago

Hi there @jadenstevens, Here's some feedback on your track 'J_money', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 We feel that adding some of our built in audio effects could really help bring this track to life! Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

i just died like my father s dad were going to steal the crown that you thought you had im not so sadi just hit up Chad let me grab a snack it tast like crab hes going to have my back sometimes its crap we're going to open the door and see who's there I hope we do not fear maybe I need a beer and i caught a tear maybe I need to learn how to get your Mans its a war maybe theres a glock in the store maybe hit up Thor get your chores little George! before it' pours in the night its a fight is that's all right i got some might for the right fight and i got alot of sight

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