over the sky wit u
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•13 Nov 2021
yeah yeah 🔥 u know u gotta keep it dope when i come to your show yeah now we be flexing coz of this course coz we don't need to go to court now when everyone be figging coz when I'm over the no one can stop me from loving you 💍🔒 we be locking it when we be jogging yall niggas i be eating your girl all night just like free salad all night just coz u might die coz i be fucking all day and night just when we be sucking yeah babygarl when i heard you had a crush on me nah just coz u lovegirls but I've been loving since the first day coz I'm Dã Açé 🔥yeah🔥🔥🔥coz i be fucking all your frnds but I'm now super good Don't need no more of your frnds but now i need u♥️♥️
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Dope sht!🔥🔥🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
What's up @shalommtshali, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'over the sky wit u'! 💥 You can clean up the recording quality here by using headphones to minimize feedback! The beat is drowning out your vocals, put them way up to get that perfect mix! Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. Timing is important to make your tracks feel more polished, try to get your bars perfectly on beat for the next one. We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! We can feel that you definitely got something inside you want to share! But its hard for us to hear you! Please try out some different microphone positions and send us your next tune! We hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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