Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Wassup @danterionjones, Thank you for sharing 'Swift (22:41:28)' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Danterion Jones

3 years ago

Haha