Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

What's up @dexxxterj, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Behind these Bars'! 💥 We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. Good beat choice, defo adds to the track. 🎼 We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Dexter Jones

3 years ago

been lonely my whole life ... a little bit of luck would have been more than I've eve had . crazy that I'm still alive and well , oh hell. what ami trying to sell, probably not so well , stress got my mind feeling like feeling like a fucking jail cell.. trying to feel low vibes ... getting a little long in the tooth I need strenuous exercise.. burn , burn , burn of these handles , got more handles than Allen I ...