2 Young

3 years ago

Its okay, definitly some stuff to work. Your vocals are good! I would say turn the beat up a bit. Around the end, you were kinda mumbling. And also stay with the beat, thats important. anyways I hopw this advice will help you with your next track!

maddmann

3 years ago

Awful days coming ahead nothing can make it better want her in my bed No talking shit no talking about a bitch don’t want anything don’t even want no head Can’t deny everything that’s already happened it’s in the air it’s what I said Promise one thing is that eventually I’m gonna have everything change give you my bread Won’t be a damn thing anyone can say nothing that anyone really can do Top ten all time pass Randy and Jerry you can bet that on anything except you Working until the day I die I’m sorry I lied hopefully your main dude screw I’ll give a little change cash and then some more change for what I blew Rings coming to me maybe not you and I get everything I’m sorry bitch it’s okay Fucked myself you fucked with me and that’s how I eventually fucked it and played Main mans is a different dude ain’t that some shit I’m still screwed don’t wanna get laid Wish that I gave everything I had but we ain’t work but eventually might make it some day Hard work coming in so damn fast and it’s smoky in this room it’s getting real hot Especially these hands on every play I’m in no bitch ain’t never gonna be no bot Please stop with all the bullshit and all the lies eventually I’m gonna caught with a cop Things I could say is fuck him fuck you not a red light in this world will make me stop Hitting this route hitting that ball south ain’t no way Imma stop running my routes Bitch if you think Imma stop then you go run my shit until you end up way down south Keep talking all that shit bitch if you think you better test me don’t fuck up make it count Hundreds on my neck test me we’ll find out who’s best how about we host a bout Matching my talent and potential gonna be difficult especially if you think you better Only dude on this team better than me is Munk when I pass him Imma be a home run hitter Everyone my bitch turn all you hoes around now it’s time Imma go and hit her Ain’t wasting a career to be a bitch turn around and become a sitter Only get one chance won’t re-live it all my homie might get shot bitch you got no balls Face fear of rejection that shit hurt in 9 Mile but right now no way in hell I’ll stall Already did that once got my ass jumped in the middle and it left my ass appalled Gotta get a new bitch knew her screw her blew her don’t care but I always called Don’t have a song subject this time just and overall perspective everything in line NFL calling my name when I’m my peak I’ll be the bad mother fucker I’ll be defined G O A T that’s what it is that’s what it’ll be working on the Greatest of All Time Seen every possible outcome each time I’m on the top and I’m still there making my climb When I die I wanna die with one person that one girl that one woman changed everything Good and bad left me sad and fucked up imma be a good dude and stay in my lane Please don’t hurt yourself that’s all I beg and ask I know I did a lot prolly did cause pain Die right on the spot no fucking around no cops wanna try and do that cocaine