Story of my life
aight hold up lemme tell yah something right quick yeah yeah welcome to my life where everything is just right the way things should just be nothing can go wrong Right? Wrong everything just fell down everything went through the wall broken to shambles no cause just effect yeah welcome to my life where everything is not right nothing can be just fine everything is just broke nothing can go right I am broken inside I think I might just crash right through the wall like POW nothing is the same inside of the membrane yeah switch up the beat like pow, pow, pow nigga pow pow pow pow breaking through the clouds made a break through yesterday made sure it was aight fucked my girl just yesterday made sure she was okay so I made her feel aight yeah yeah stop playing wit me
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @corrupt, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Story of my life', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ Great vocals here, spot on. Keep recording like this! โ Nice timing, the rhythm of your voice fits the beat perfectly. ๐ The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ Effects can help improve tracks, but be careful how to use them. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. ๐ค All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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