Jason Worters

3 years ago

thanks team

Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @citystreetz, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'my try'! 💥 There's an issue with the vocals here, try playin' around with the mic positioning as it's not comin' out clear. Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track! You're getting really close having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Wow. This is just pure flames. Well done you defo have what it takes to reach the top! 💯 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jason Worters

3 years ago

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.