Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @jayarsh, We're gonna review your track 'MyFirstRap'. Let's get it! Your vocals are nice and clear, keep that same mic set up! 🤙 Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jay Arsh

3 years ago

The truth hurts, hard pill to swallow. Leader of the pack, I'll never follow. You can't see that, Where's ya head, Sleepy Hollow, Pen game sick, Spit gospel, write a novel. Fire in the booth, Make mics melt, Put ya soul on the track, They hate love ya self. It's all about expression, Grind study lessons, Hip Hop forever, You got any questions?