life
Tom Black50 Plays
•08 Nov 2021
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hi there @tomblack.2642, Here's some feedback on your track 'life ', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Nice flow here - delivery is so important. 🎶 The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 We are liking your use of effects on this one. ⭐ Love your take on this masterclass, you mixed it up from the original and showed some originality. We'd love to hear a written track next! Nice subtle use of effects as well, you didn't overdo it like many do, and it sounds great. There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. 🤟 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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