Grain (15:47)
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•07 Nov 2021
irreversibly irrelevent gun smoke leaves skeletons virtuously my mental intelligence has me celebent just do it for the hell of it deface the benevolent listenin with a prejudice risk it all words are heaven sent sent to reinvent curse the intent withstanding this residence concious is repetitive slightly indifferent to the sedative release this resonance kneel and repent never give in to sin think of your daughter let this heartache end always say your prayers dont let the depression in i know you are scared the rope starts to lessen tears fall and your voice is crackin this weakeness like the beast the craygon. i am my only friend i cant find oxygen my addiction a loss and i regret the fall i miss you baby dont forget daddy baby doll you are my Sunshine my only sunshine just forget this pain i know im the one to blame. your the only thing that makes me sane or makes my heart ache wishin to be around, daddys in the fast lane watchin for the day i see your face and i can explain everything and i want you to listen you arr the victim i pray god lifts my infliction death is my resemblence life without you is relentless i wish addiction and depression werent endless in fiction the stories position is swiftless risking life creating distance must change this decision reverse engineer inution ask for forgiveness here is my soul lift me from this depression end this fruitless incision to fuckin change my incination to erase my mistakes face my flaws insanity as i crawl towards percision but trust in my indifference im here and ill come home quit wishin just hush baby and listen your my only sunshine
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Hey @jamesdylansprouse.1847, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Grain (15:47)'! 💥 Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Keep practicing your craft! Every track you make is going to get a little better! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
irreversibly irrelevent gun smoke leaves skeletons virtuously my mental intelligence has me celebent just do it for the hell of it deface the benevolent listenin with a prejudice risk it all words are heaven sent sent to reinvent curse the intent withstanding this residence concious is repetitive slightly indifferent to the sedative release this resonance kneel and repent never give in to sin think of your daughter let this heartache end always say your prayers dont let the depression in i know you are scared the rope starts to lessen tears fall and your voice is crackin this weakeness like the beast the craygon. i am my only friend i cant find oxygen my addiction a loss and i regret the fall i miss you baby dont forget daddy baby doll you are my Sunshine my only sunshine just forget this pain i know im the one to blame. your the only thing that makes me sane or makes my heart ache wishin to be around, daddys in the fast lane watchin for the day i see your face and i can explain everything and i want you to listen you arr the victim i pray god lifts my infliction death is my resemblence life without you is relentless i wish addiction and depression werent endless in fiction the stories position is swiftless risking life creating distance must change this decision reverse engineer inution ask for forgiveness here is my soul lift me from this depression end this fruitless incision to fuckin change my incination to erase my mistakes face my flaws insanity as i crawl towards percision but trust in my indifference im here and ill come home quit wishin just hush baby and listen your my only sunshine
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