Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

What's up @ssalomodah, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Rich (23:34)'! 💥 The beat is drowning out your voice, get the vocals cranked waay up so we can hear your bars! Try recording yourself and listening back to perfect your timing over the beat. Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Nice use of effects, it really adds to the track. ⭐ With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Ssalomo Dah

3 years ago

salomondah While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down Look, I’m rich Gettin' paid So yeah I’m The man now While you down On your knees And you wait For handouts All them things I done sold All them things I ran out All you lames Better stay In your lanes Stand down