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Freestyle

Freestyle

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06 Nov 2021

Could he be dead lying around or is he inside of a room Nobody really knows he disappeared quicker than dirt to edge of my broom Sleeping in a car in Florida maybe he’s dealing with a sonic boom How do you know what to expect when his momma makes his mother fucking ass zoom Leaving so damn fast it’s leading to bad shit and some depression Never thought that he’d leave but I guess childhood sends a different message Predictions and possible destinations change so fast ain’t no missing Mind fill up so fucking fast with thoughts of happened so many questions Examining all the shit we went through at a younger and better age Is there a chance we can get back to where we were and turn the page Will they be able to watch me when I make it to the biggest stage Cause his momma lock him up inside a room man it’s like a fucking cage Darian leave my mind so fast no one’s knows what’s it’s like for his grind Homelessness and starvation mixed together don’t add up no need for bind Maybe a possible destination if he come with me together we’ll stay in line Fuck his pops fuck his momma both bitches can’t prevent me cause they ain’t mine Brothers stay solid RIP to what was I’m sorry for everything I did No words can express you can get it from me I didn’t mean to we hid Can’t put a price on loyalty I didn’t intend to switch up decision wasn’t made by a kid Fucked situation she was all over my dick now she gone fuck everyone no one doing my bid Visions and opinions go through a couple different stages public see with only one eye Making some bitches leave toxicity it’s easy to make them cry Way life is right now as far as I’m concerned I might as well fucking die You guys ain’t never gonna see from my angle damn sure won’t be on my side Few people understand what happens when you tortured then you go and spike Spiking that ball down to the ground you hear my ass I’m the one dropping the mic Will never be able to comprehend what you do day in day out cause I ain’t nothing like Darian my bro he my homie and I’m sorry can apologize enough didn’t do it outta spite Turn back the clock that’s what I’d do if I knew that al of would be here right now Never mind that’s outta the conversation he could be in Kansas he’s for sure outta town Put me in this conversation talk about that man y’all some fucking clowns Put that mask on them outfits on let’s run every mother fucker outta this world Reps coming in hot have rainy days fucking up names color yellow I curled Opportunities coming in hot it’s good cause in 10 years Imma get her million dollar pearls Obstacles come and go here they blow back and forth millions coming to my world

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2 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 years ago

Hey @maddmann, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Freestyle', here are our thoughts 💥 The vocals came out real clear. However you recorded them keep doin' it. Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 Good choice of beat! 🎼 We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! This track would pack a crazy punch if you let the beat breathe a little better. You can still rap fast, but make you you don't go off beat in the process. It's a fine balance! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

3 years ago

@zee247 Hey man I feel you. I know exactly what you mean. I know where I slipped, I just didn’t care to re-do it again. I had re-done it so many times so I just posted it. But I’ll get it better next time.

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