Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @marcellaschandler! Welcome to our feedback of 'Up guarding me 🙏🏼😔💙'! 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. You're not on beat with this one, try practising your timing so you can improve on your tracks. The beat is dope and really works for this track. 🎼 Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Marcellas Chandler

3 years ago

Ya missing Pops everday more and more i cant believe your gone to much to comprehend thats no pretend i know you up guarding me just wish it was from earth man the day you died it felt like a curse man everyday it gets worse the only way i can express my feelings about this is in this verse man i cant believe you left this universe man that day i couldnt believe it occured man if i only could have 5 more minutes i wish heaven had visits man i hate that you had that sickness man it happened in only minutes theres no limits to how heartbroken our bond is gone this song goes out to you grandpa i love you man that night i knew i remember the last words you said then the next thing i know your dead i miss you grandpa