Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hey @alialaouieh, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'Jeff Beats'! 💥 Just bring that vocal volume down a bit and you'll see an improvement in the mix quality. Your flow here needs improvement, try and work on this for your next track. Try listen back to your rap and see if you can get your bars to have better timing with the beat. The recoding quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. 👌 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Ali Alaouieh

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.